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The Couplet and the Villanelle by ~Mystakaphoros:iconMystakaphoros:



The Couplet and the Villanelle

Said the couplet to the villanelle
"You, for all of your complexity
really are a vacuum and a shell
overwrought and odd, compared to me.
You, for all your cunning and your craft
your metaphors and similes and signs
conjure awkward rhymes that make me laugh
strung together in repeating lines."
Said the villanelle to couplet small
"I know I can ramble on at times
but, you know, you are inside of me
and you are complicit in my rhymes.
What's ironic though, you know... doggonnit.
both of us are stuck within this sonnet."
:iconmystakaphoros:

Author's Comments

Another one.

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-10-13

The Couplet and the Villanelle by ~Mystakaphoros is well-rhymed, humorous poem whose last two lines reveal the cleverness of the structure. There's nothing like light verse to make one's day a little brighter. (Featured by ^SparrowSong)

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:icondrinkndrivelikejehu:
This one is so wonderfully language-geeky it makes me smile.
:iconmystakaphoros:
One of my profs was making fun for me for writing villanelles and sestinas. So I figgered a sonnet would be an appropriate forum to host the debate.

--
"I guess I'm an underwater thing,
so I guess I can't take it personally."
--Tori Amos, "Liquid Diamonds"
:icongaioumonbatou:
Haha, fantastic! :laughing: Congratulations on the DD!

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"i'd prefer overwork to underwork, and underwork to underwear

wait what" - =scrotumnose

*DailyDeviants | `seniormentors | #Writers-Workshop
:iconlit-twitter:
Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. :)

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Hear lit tweet here
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
thumbs up for this one, love it!

--
"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)
:icongaioumonbatou:
DDs change based on my time zone, little bird, I have the advantage. :ahoy:

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Avatar: =elicoronel16

"i'd prefer overwork to underwork, and underwork to underwear

wait what" - =scrotumnose

*DailyDeviants | `seniormentors | #Writers-Workshop
:iconbloodskrawl:
Amazing

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For I am the People's Poet! My written words speak volumes of your inner-most thoughts and deep-set , heart-felt emotions!
:iconcraazhy:
This is so adorable, I love it.

--
"Think left, think right. Think low, think high. Oh the thinks you can think up if only you try!" - Dr. Seuss

To the Universe
:iconolileslie32:
This totally made me smile! Congratulations on the DD! :clap:

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